Thank you God for Saadat! WeLcOmE baCk!So good to see u ,bro!
Absoloute joy to read such a wonderful piece and bro,the other bloggers and visitors deserved it!
Bohat AAla!
Love stanzas no.4,5 ,7 and 8!CLASsIC!!
Well done !

Good to see u back after so long dude !
Nice shaery !

nice very nice indeed

wah wah!!! kia baat hai bhaee..

Bahut Khoooob!!!!!
I like last she’r the most

Mukarar, mukarar! Nice one!

Assalam-o-alaikum!
I knew it yara gee khattak ka viva tow abhi rehta 2ndly vp ka project I mean Simp3 nay tumhara yeh haal kar diya hai.
well putting everything aside. balaa ki sundaer kavita hai.
wassalam.

quite impressive…a genuine voice of reason and relevant theme..

LOL!!!loved d last one…lol!
so didja meet knicq???ya masroof rahe, VB aur sim3 mein??

Aapi: Thanks! Glad you liked it!

Saady: Thanks, man!

Moiz: Thanks!

NJ, Gul & Sara: Aadab arz!

Imran: SiMP3 ne tou ibitida ki hai, abhi aur bhi projects hein! Laikin I doubt if others would be able to make me write a verse, if you know what I mean!

Naveed: Thanks!

Ziom: You loved the last one? Tum bhi kahin zuban mun’h mein dabayay tou nahin phirtay? And that’s VP (Visual Programming – name of the course) and NOT VB. I don’t like VB! And no, Bhaijan and I couldn’t meet, but talked on the phone.

Claps , u wont stop impressing me

BUHAT ROEEY HAIN HUM TUM SAAY SAACH BOOL KER
AAB YEAH GHUM SEENAY MAIN CHUPAEY PHIRTAAY HAIN…..

Well done buddy…u decided to come back again…i think u cant control…Keep it up…byZzz till next time

Saad: *bows*

Nauman: Kia baat hai! Waisay sir, aap ne shairi kab start ki?

WoW…great response time its less than an hour…anyways Congrat. to PAK, Victory against West INDIES & Eid Greetings to all….
talk abt SHAIRI well its just a rush of blood nothing else….i am not a SHAIR and i think its better to all ppl arround me…B A K R A…

Saadat: First of all, I must tell you once again, how much I hated not being able tomeet you. Next time around, even if I am there for a half hour, I’ll ensure we meet up…and if that takes pulling you out of class, and knocking my bro on the head for getting his Isloo directions right, so be it!

Secondly, I LOVED this ghazal. Its been ages since I was able to pen a ghazal, and frankly I have never been able to get my ghazal right. This is LOVELY!

Especially, the rai ka pahad wala she’r.

Perhaps, you can look at my ghazals and give me some pointers…?

Oh, I am sorry.That was the Raika parbat wala she’r….

But, at least you know, I am reading it over and over…eh?

oey paaaglooo koi seedha remarks bhi da do
alif bbbb aati nahin hai waaah waah karta ho…
waaah waah kia poem hai zabardast shair ggg

Ustaad Faseeh: Please refrain from addressing everybody else here as ‘paaaglooo‘; I am completely sure that their knowledge of ‘alif bay‘ is far better than mine. Thanks for liking the poetry, though.